After doing the Gemma A morph, decided I had to do a complete painting. Took a week of sneaked-in half-hours, but here it is. Face didn't quite come out as I hoped it would, but I'm otherwise rather pleased with it.
EDIT: So, I have no artistic integrity and/or backbone. Caved in under public pressure - cleared the eyes and did all sort of things with the mouth.
You got the anatomy and muscles right. The shading and lighting is very realistic as expected by your style. The folds are also perfect. However, you are right in saying that the face is the main flaw.
The eyes are the big problem on the face IMO. They look bloodshot or make her look like she contracted "pink-eye".
Also, she could've used a smirk. However, the rest of the body is good.
Overall, you did a nice job. You did manage to be faithful to Power Girl's costume. I will say that too.
Hey, super-heroines with huge busts have feelings/problems/all-night deinking binges, too! What do we know of her life? But, yeah, OK, put in some changes.
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You got the anatomy and muscles right. The shading and lighting is very realistic as expected by your style. The folds are also perfect. However, you are right in saying that the face is the main flaw.
The eyes are the big problem on the face IMO. They look bloodshot or make her look like she contracted "pink-eye".
Also, she could've used a smirk. However, the rest of the body is good.
Overall, you did a nice job. You did manage to be faithful to Power Girl's costume. I will say that too.
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